Second Draft of Video

This is my finished second draft of my video. Whilst not having anymore footage; there are no gaps in the filming and I feel I have shown much more skill in editing and the use of effects. However I unfortunately seem to of made in error when exporting the file so it is in lower quality then I would of hoped. I will therefore try to fix this as soon as i can however my absence from college next week will make this difficult to do before my deadline.